I played just the demo, but I would say that was enough to feel that this is not a game for me. The graphics, menu, and most of the stuff I have seen so far look pretty well done, so no complaints on that side.
Points where I think the game could improve: the story is really bland. I couldn't read more than 3 text boxes without getting annoyed, and it feels lazy, like an excuse: "this is a porn game, so we don't need any good story." And at that point, I ask you: if you don't want to write a good story, why make a story-based visual novel XD? You can put some effort in there, or scratch it from the to-do list and put more effort into other mechanics in my opinion ^^! The story writing is very mediocre because it is redundant, contextually uninteresting, and especially the dialogues sound unnatural. This could be a translation issue, but as an author, I would say the core problem really lies in the chosen context and basic formulations. Not everyone has to be a writer, but for story-based games like visual novels, you should have stronger writing skills than what the game currently shows. Arcade games in the erotic genre are no less popular. In my view, the texts even harm the rest of the work because they are so mediocre to poorly executed.
The other thing is that the mechanics for fooling around and sex are really basic. I’m not saying you did a bad job, but it doesn’t feel worth playing. The sound is nice because the girls are cute, and I think the moans for the scenes you created fit, but there should be more — more sex and more moaning, so that you actually have a chance of enjoying this part.
The graphics, in my opinion, turned out quite well and show clear potential for more! Even though the gameplay and mechanics are a bit on the weaker side, I didn’t encounter any issues compared to many others here. Not a single bug from the start to the end of the demo — solid work in Unity.
A commonly seen problem like “can’t install” or “flagged as a virus,” etc., can clearly be identified as a Windows issue caused by User Account Control and the overly sensitive Windows Defender. Because the executable is not digitally signed. This is normal for unsigned Unity builds and does not mean the game is unsafe. Simply adding a note in the game description explaining this can reduce confusion or reports. If you want to fully prevent these reports, signing the executable with a code-signing certificate is required, though that can be costly.
Thank you for your detailed comment. I agree with you on many points. It was my first game, which I made almost two years ago. Since then, my small team and I have improved a lot. As a result, my second game was released eight months ago, and now we are developing a new exciting project that several people are already working on. In it, we are fully committed to creating a solid story that will be separate from the erotic content. But we have also taken the eroticism to a new level.
I would like you to join our community! Thoughtful people like you are truly valuable in an industry where people just come for a quick thrill.
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Awaiting the mobile version.
getting an antivirus popup. I am not risking that
loving this game
tolong buat versi android🥺
Bro berpikir atminnya orang indo😹🥀
Will there be a mobile version?
Yea
i knew i saw this somewhere before
the dev changed game's name because it's illegal.
what was it called before?
I played just the demo, but I would say that was enough to feel that this is not a game for me. The graphics, menu, and most of the stuff I have seen so far look pretty well done, so no complaints on that side.
Points where I think the game could improve: the story is really bland. I couldn't read more than 3 text boxes without getting annoyed, and it feels lazy, like an excuse: "this is a porn game, so we don't need any good story." And at that point, I ask you: if you don't want to write a good story, why make a story-based visual novel XD? You can put some effort in there, or scratch it from the to-do list and put more effort into other mechanics in my opinion ^^!
The story writing is very mediocre because it is redundant, contextually uninteresting, and especially the dialogues sound unnatural. This could be a translation issue, but as an author, I would say the core problem really lies in the chosen context and basic formulations. Not everyone has to be a writer, but for story-based games like visual novels, you should have stronger writing skills than what the game currently shows. Arcade games in the erotic genre are no less popular. In my view, the texts even harm the rest of the work because they are so mediocre to poorly executed.
The other thing is that the mechanics for fooling around and sex are really basic. I’m not saying you did a bad job, but it doesn’t feel worth playing. The sound is nice because the girls are cute, and I think the moans for the scenes you created fit, but there should be more — more sex and more moaning, so that you actually have a chance of enjoying this part.
The graphics, in my opinion, turned out quite well and show clear potential for more! Even though the gameplay and mechanics are a bit on the weaker side, I didn’t encounter any issues compared to many others here.
Not a single bug from the start to the end of the demo — solid work in Unity.
A commonly seen problem like “can’t install” or “flagged as a virus,” etc., can clearly be identified as a Windows issue caused by User Account Control and the overly sensitive Windows Defender. Because the executable is not digitally signed. This is normal for unsigned Unity builds and does not mean the game is unsafe. Simply adding a note in the game description explaining this can reduce confusion or reports. If you want to fully prevent these reports, signing the executable with a code-signing certificate is required, though that can be costly.
Thank you for your detailed comment. I agree with you on many points. It was my first game, which I made almost two years ago. Since then, my small team and I have improved a lot. As a result, my second game was released eight months ago, and now we are developing a new exciting project that several people are already working on. In it, we are fully committed to creating a solid story that will be separate from the erotic content. But we have also taken the eroticism to a new level.
I would like you to join our community! Thoughtful people like you are truly valuable in an industry where people just come for a quick thrill.
Hello the game is not available on patreon what can i do ?
I mean the full V
If you like half a second looping unity animations with a poorly translated story this is the game for you!
If not? Don't bother.
WHATS the full version game on is it out ?
Is it coming to android ?
Is there going to be a Android version?
Is it just simply animated or is it Interactive also?
I still have the old version when I bought it before it got taken down. Is there any changes?
can someone explayn to me y is the ej meter not going up?
After 100 progress. You open different way for interacts)